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Pony by EvilScarrlett


Beloved

 

Thinking of you

I don’t know where to start

There once was joy

That used to rule my heart

 

That face I would see

Always glad to welcome me

But all has faded

Since you had to leave

 

Warm fur and big eyes

I long to see once more

Soft feathers and smooth scales

My memories now are torn

 

Whether bird, reptile, feline

Or canine and rodent be

The sadness is there

For all the world to see

 

This memory won’t end

This is only a start

Your bowl is empty

And so is my heart

 

Maybe someday soon

Though we had to part

We’ll see each other again

In a meeting of our hearts



something I wrote months ago for beloved pets everywhere- this loss hurts :(. I thought of my cat Pony when I wrote this. though He had sisters, but the hurt was unbearable and cancer is a horrible way to go. RIP Pony 6/15/98- 6/22/09.
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rebelnijamaster Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
It's so hard to lose a pet. They become members of your family and they sort of take a place in your heart that you just can't explain. So sorry to hear that you're missing your little guy. :hug:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you. he was a very good boy, I do have another boy who reminds me of Pony. they would have hated each other because they want me all to themselves. :) I tried to include all types of animals in the poem but my heart is always with my kitties.
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AurorynDragon Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Oh :( I feel so sorry for you :( I know how it feels, previous year, my cat almost passed away (she got better but it was a horrible feeling), she was sick and was bleeding from her mouth, so we went to the vet but he said that if the medication he gave wouldn't work, my cat would not live for long time anymore, but after a few weeks or a month I think, she fortunately got better, it was a miracle actually because she seemed so...almost dead :(
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad your kitty got better. I hope you have her for a very long time!
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AurorynDragon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Thank you, yeah well she's already 12-13 years old..
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My oldest girl is about to turn 17 :D Her name is Clee Bear and she came from England.
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AurorynDragon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Oh, that's nice ^^ (but I meant my cat was 12-13 years old)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I knew what you meant :)
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AurorynDragon Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Ah okay :)
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Lin--Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Ohh...I'm almost cry, you must be very sad. My condolences.

And, the poem is very beautiful. <3
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
He's been gone awhile but yes it still makes me sad. I have a new man cat and he reminds me of Pony in ways, odd for that to happen :) thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate you!
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Lin--Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Oh, no problem, last year I lost my cat, He was my friend since I was 8 years old..and I still miss him.

But I have another pets, and they makes me very happy.

I appreciate you too! n.n
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry to hear about your kitty cat. I have 4 (I lost another boy a couple of years ago) and I have an old girl in that group- she will be 17 in April.
I'm glad your other pets are comfort to you :)
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Lin--Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Yus! Hug 

Now I have 2 cats, a siamese (male) and a ball of fur. (fem.) Heart 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this, its so true
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh thank you so much for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate your comment too :)
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You take the time to read my work so it is only fair to do the same :D
I like your writing and have finally thought of something to say in a comment :meow:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I appreciate it, really. say how you feel even if it seems weird. I don't ever mind comments :D
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Joe-Maccer Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
A loss of a pet is always hurtful. Great piece. :heart:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for reading and commenting :)
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Joe-Maccer Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
My pleasure. :bow:2 rvmp 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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KunYKA Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
poor kitty:'(
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
He was a good boy.
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KunYKA Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah...

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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave too.
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KunYKA Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wish I could but haz no points :(
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KunYKA Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok...
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